Write an effective argument for our chosen political party.

WALT: Write an effective argument for our chosen political party.

Have you voted yet? National party is an obvious pick its very business oriented. I really do believe that New Zealand is going fine having National so my opinion is to keep National in govern. For example, I know that there are to many workplace injuries and deaths. I am aware that they are going to fund private and public tertiary educations on an equal basis. Another great policy, People have firearms in their cars and houses that they are not allowed to. As you know what party I like lets go over the first policy for National and this is a very good reason to vote for National.

National has created a policy to implement new measures to reduce workplace death and injury
National believes that people should be safe from injury and death at work.  They want to put in new ideas so that people don't hurt them self they want to reduce death and injury by ¼ by 2020. I believe this is a good policy because it means that people will be able to come back to there family. This is a good policy because it helps people get money for there families and if they get really unwell there life will change forever, and they might not be able to do what they like to do. Funding private and public schools the same amount is also another important policy.


National has created a policy to Fund private and public tertiary educations on an equal basis. National believes tertiary education organisations should be treated the same for funding purposes, whether or not  they are public or private. Increasing the funding available to private tertiary education organisations should ensure all tertiary education organisations have incentives to innovate and to focus more on student demand and outcomes.I believe this is a good policy so that students that go to both schools get the same learning and attention. So that both schools will have money to get the same quality of resources so in public schools you will get the same resources as you do in private. Another good policy is that National created is to allow police to search house and cars for firearms in some cases.


National has created a policy to allow police to search house and cars for firearms in some cases methamphetamine and the gangs who sell it are trouble to society. National is committed to stopping gangs selling drugs and firearms, people who do will hope fully get imprisoned stopping the proceeds of their criminal activity.Currently police require warrants to search houses and cars in most circumstances. Giving the criminals time to hide anything or clean up any evidence. So that the criminals don't have time to hide the firearms and  if they have anything else that's illegal they would have time to get rid of any evidence or hide any illegal substances. So that they don't have any time to do anything illegal or life changing like ending their own life or someone else's. I believe that National is a better political party than Labour let's see why.


Labour has a poor policy to abolish National Standards. I think this is not a good policy because student won't be able to see what they are working towards and National standards help teachers keep track of what students have achieved. I do not like this policy because everyone finds it easier to read off of the National standards and if we don't have them we won't know what to practice and every student should know what they are at for there National standards. This is a poor policy because if we don't have them then we won't know what standard we are working for and we might be learning things that we already know or things that are easy for us. Labour has these types of policies however, National doesn't, let’s summarize there great policies.


Ok so there, I have just explained a lot about why National is a good party to vote for. I believe National is a very business oriented party. I have talked about deaths and injuries in workplace, allowing the police to search houses and cars for firearms without consent in some cases and  to Fund private and public tertiary educations on an equal basis. You know who im voting for who are you voting for?



My next steps are: to finish the writing more independently and use more advanced punctuation.

Comments

Popular posts from this blog

kapa haka distinction #3

kapa haka distinction #10

home learning challenge distinction #4