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For this piece of writing I have focusing on my vocabulary and punctuation. I have been learning to: - use a range of precise vocabulary to communicate meaning (Year ⅞) use all basic punctuation independently and attempt more complex punctuation (eg semicolons, colons, parentheses) (Year 7/8)

The pieces of my writing that are highlighted green are where I have shown my vocabulary and punctuation goal
My Story... shylas trip to Mexico
Here is what Shyla is like she lives in a little flat in Paris. She is an amazing person she is kind hearted she loves to help others and is always there to help. She is only 23 years old and has big dreams. She loves cats and kittens. And has a younger brother his name is Jason he is 19 years old. She loves her family she's always helping them in any way she can, she has a dog named fluffy it's a white Samoyed.
Shyla has been saving up to go to Mexico for awhile now and finally Shyla got enough to get there and back plus a bi…